12 Examples of How To Write a Brilliant Title
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I've received a few messages asking for help / advice in writing good, catchy titles. Here are 12 examples of great titles:
NAME + PRICE + EXTRA INFO
1. Women's Parka Jacket for £5 with FREE Delivery
2. Clinique Beauty Box for £20 with delivery!
3. Half Price Happyland Cottage at Mothercare
4. Pampers Nappies (198 Pack) for £5.65 at Amazon
5. Cotton Rich Cardigan only £8 at Marks & Spencer
6. Half Price Toys at Wilko! Free C&C
7. EasyJet Sale March-June 2017 starts 6th October!
8. Half Price Duracell Ultra Power AA Batteries
9. Kid's Caterpillar Rocker only £2.93 (collect in-store)
10. October flights to France just £16 return!
11. £100 off a Bosch vacuum. Now £69.99 with Free Delivery!
12. 15 Halloween Balloons for Party Fun just £1.39
Here are some examples of titles that are not so good...
a. Toshiba PX019281293 Laptop
b. Stella 14x120
c. Clarks Shoes
d. IDJFX Jewelry Gold Rings CZ Crystal
c. Beauty box
I want to help everyone get lots of attention to their deals. Good titles are the best way to do that. Have a go at keeping it simple: avoid product codes or funky things like 182ABJaf9... and think, how can I make this catchy?
"Reduced-to-clear Laptop only £15 with FREE Delivery" is better than..."ASOS PX5000 Ci3 Gobbidy plus bag"
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me anything. I'm always happy to (and often do) call you and chat on the phone!
Tom 
It would be great to have a 'Free Delivery' Icon to use, especially as the space for text is quite limited
Hi Sarah! That's a great idea - I'll have a think about where we could add an option into the share pages. Any ideas for an icon for free delivery? A truck?
'Free Delivery' or 'Delivered' goes without saying if there's a shipping fee. Of course, including it in the title does make it look better.
Thanks for the tips. Glad someone bumped this up. Wouldn't have looked at it from 2 years ago!! Lol. I will try to make my deals catchier. Usually I just put whatever the product is from the website. I'll add more info now!
Tom also wrote another thread about deal titles here https://www.latestdeals.co.uk/chat/help-write-deal-title
It also contains a link to another thread about deal descriptions https://www.latestdeals.co.uk/chat/help-write-deal-description
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